Sample of Creative Editing and Editing with Online Best Practices

Original Online Mission Statement

Revamped Online Mission Statement

The most important change is: rather than saying MarinLink is “nimble”, show that it is nimble using active language that takes less time to read.

My big question is are those arrows too garish?

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So Long MarinLink.org – Version 2009-2011 – All Good Things Must Come to an End…

MarinLink.org Home Page With 2009 Template. Two columns, Lapinski Banner, and Posts on Left column